On kellywright006’s question above. This is a good point about the longer phrases that need to read in “full” in order that your voice/reading reflect the comma. It does make for a long piece for your DD to remember and write out all at once, but I would say that we should be reading it according to the punctuation (or at least making that the goal). If we read in a way that suggests pauses or commas in places other than those which the author placed, we are not providing the true flow of the author’s overall thought; instead of getting the passage in context, the child is getting word/phrase parts. Of course, there might be exceptions here and there, but I am feeling as though we should be trying as much as possible to be dictating according to the punctuation in the passage.
If she is struggling with it, perhaps she needs more methods and varied methods during her dictation study days? I always feel that by the time the dictation day comes around, after 3 or 4 study days, the child should have it down cold, and in some cases my son by day 3 or 4 of studying has it almost memorized. My son is only 5th grade and probably earlier in SW than your DD, but I know that when I don’t guide him on his SW studying, he simply doesn’t study the passage effectively. I really wanted SW on “study days” to be independent for him, but it has proven not to be the case. Each child is different, of course!
HTH a bit, I will be interested to know what others have to say.