Hi!
Sorry you haven’t had any replies. I myself don’t get on real often. But I have sort of have the same situation with my son. Avid reader, though he does have good comprehension, his critical thinking skills are not sharp. His writing is coming along though. Here’s what I did for this year, 9th gr.:
Abeka Grammar and Composition I
Jensen’s Format Writing
Beautiful Feet Books for History/Literature
I chose Jensen’s Format Writing on the advice of a friend, and I have to say it is great. It starts right at the beginning and tells them exactly what to do. My son is writing more this year than ever before, and a lot of it he can do on his own without me teaching it which is nice, since I have a 7 year old as well. It starts out with basic paragraphs, and takes them all the way to research and essay papers.
For grammar, I would stick with what you have- EG plus. Keep your Total Language Plus, and try WriteShop with it. Those are all great programs. I’m not sure about using ILL with her, because I haven’t used it myself. But I know that it’s probably not going to teach her a lot of grammar. But, on the other hand, it may help her develop some good LA skills.
I would say try as best as you can to do oral narration and dictation with her 2-3 times a week. I’m sure that you’ll see results. SCM has a list of creative narration ideas-
http://simplycharlottemason.com/timesavers/narration/
I hope that gives you a little help. I sort of did the same thing with my son and the eclectic approach. Switching around is definitely a detriment to their LA development, so I would say find something and just stick with it. Even if it feels like it’s not working, you may just need to work through a rough patch, and then you and your kids will have a breakthrough.
Good luck!