I didn’t want to hi – jack the other thread. Lol! I have a 9 year old who is almost to written narration. I am wondering if you correct their written narration? So far any writing she does I try to help correct it as she goes. Most of her writing has been copywork, so it has been easy.
I do not correct everything. I hold the child accountable for spelling/grammar we have covered and choose 1-2 things to focus on – maybe run-on sentences or capitalization or commas. I don’t wish to bleed all over the paper with my red pen and this be a terrible discouragement.
Agreeing w/ missceegee. I choose to focus more on the content and less on their spelling or punctuation mistakes. My dd (almost 9) is notorious for capitalization mistakes. She often capitalizes letters in the middle of a word, but not the first letter of a sentence. I’ll say something like, “Remember, all sentences begin with a capital letter. Let’s try to remember that next time, ok?” English for the Thoughtful Child, vol. 1 has been her only “formal” grammar instruction, and that was last year, so I can’t really expect her to remember all of that AND write a good narration. She also has not started prepared dictation, so I can’t really hold her accountable for spelling, unless it’s an obvious word that I know she knows. Dd is still spelling phonetically the majority of the time, but I am hopeful that starting prepared dictation with her next year will help with that.
Thanks so much for your input. I am excited to begin.
Petitemom: I agree. I think if I remember to be gentle about the corrections (not too many at a time and skills appropriate) correcting narrations is a good idea.
Missceegee: Do you tell them ahead of time what you are looking for? Like a reminder to capitalize beforehand? Or do you just assume those skills should be known? Just curious. I know the point of correction is to teach, so I am sure either way works. I am just wondering you approach. Also, do you ever have them re – do it to correct it or do you just talk to them about the mistakes?
LindseyD: I loved how you plainly stated (in the other thread) that your 10 yr old (or maybe he was 11?) does written narrations daily and that he is just used to it now. Such a simple idea, but what you hold your children accountable to they will rise to do it. Lol For some reason this just really encouraged me.
Summary Narration from the most important current event (her choice) of the week.
1-2 page Narration from her history readings
varies
My ds10 has 3 written narrations per week. We started with one at the beginning of the year.
2 drawn/written narrations from Storybook of Science
1 written narration from Pharaohs of Ancient Egypt (a difficult start, I admit)
I don’t usually tell them what I’m looking for. I just choose something wrong and work from there. Both kids have had grammar and mechanics so I expect them to apply what they’ve learned. They aren’t perfect, but it is improving weekly. I don’t always have them correct or rewrite a final draft, but will sometimes choose one to polish.
Thanks for the specifics! Just to bother you a little more…lol! Sorry! Are the written narrations from books that they have read themselves (storybook of science, etc) or readings that you do aloud?
I assign written narrations from independently read books, personally. RA books, I ask for oral narrations.
I use composition books by subject for grades 7-12, getting a new one when one book is full. Younger grades use notebook paper that goes in a binder. This idea is from HUFI blog on organization.
If I may add, I learned English as a second language and this is how I learned the most, by having someone correct my papers and explain me my mistakes.
I’m curious about your creative narration in response to Oliver Twist. Can you share what you are doing? One of my girls started doing some creative responses when they read Witch of Blackbird Pond and it got me thinking that this is an area I should be exploring more than I have been.