Correcting narration?

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  • I looked back through the narration threads and was not able to find an answer to this question. Forgive me if I am repeating a common request. Smile

    How do you feel about correcting written narration?  Do you correct spelling and grammar or just facts?

    Thanks!

    momto2blessings
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    I’m no expert, hopefully Sonya or someone more experienced will chime in!  But I was just reading through some of CM’s Volume 6, and this caught my eye.  The preceding paragraph was talking about 7-9 yr. olds, I’m assuming this would be related to the 9 and older group, when written narrations were encourage to begin:

    “Children shouldn’t be hassled or pressured about using proper punctuation and capital letters when they write their narrations. Those things will take care of themselves if the child reads a lot, and too many coaxings to use correct punctuation usually results in the over-use of commas.”

    I’d love to hear from the experts:)  Gina

    Gina,  Thanks for the input.  That is what I have been thinking, but it drives me nuts to see bad grammar and punctuation and do nothing about it. 🙂

     

    Jen

    meesh
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    I’m no expert either, but here is an idea.  If your kids are old enough to be learning grammar ( I think the recommendation is 5th grade) then you could let them write their narrations on day 1.  Then, on day 2 give the written narration back to the child and have him look back over it and find his own mistakes.  Say something like, “You are missing two commas”, or “You forgot to capitalize an important proper noun, can you find it?”  Then you are using their own writing as a grammar lesson.  

    If the words that he is misspelling are common words that he should know how to spell, then you might use these words in his next spelling lesson.  

    I think it really depends on the age of the child.  I think for high school kids who are writing narrations, their grammar mistakes should be pointed out rather than ignored. Even though grammar is delayed in the early years, there comes a point where proper grammar  is important and your child should strive to use it in all writings, even narrations.

    I’m not sure if others will agree with me on this, this is just what I personally think.

    HTH,

    Michelle

     

    Sonya Shafer
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    I like Michelle’s approach and would like to add a couple of thoughts.

    Make sure the student is comfortable with narration before you start “criticizing” her work. (We all know that it’s not really criticizing, but it can feel like that to the student.) We don’t want the student to get discouraged that her narrations are “never good enough.”

    When you are ready to fine tune those narrations, focus on one aspect at at time. For example, you might focus on using commas. Talk about when and how to use them, then use the written narrations as practice exercises until the student has that aspect mastered pretty well. Then move on to a different aspect, maybe capitalization or something, but continue to hold the student accountable for the aspect(s) already worked on.

    You could take a few weeks to privately make a list of common mistakes you are seeing in the student’s written narrations. That list could then become your guide for future tweaking and fine tuning, one at a time.

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